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Zero EXE Wonderswan Sheet
Hello, I am megaguy2222, and today I present to you...
[Image: zero_exe_wonderswan_sheet.png]
Zero.EXE! Rockman.EXE Wonderswan Style!
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26-11-2017 08:17 PM
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RE: Zero EXE Wonderswan Sheet
(26-11-2017 08:17 PM)megaguy2222 Wrote:  Hello, I am megaguy2222, and today I present to you...
Zero.EXE! Rockman.EXE Wonderswan Style!
They're not bad, however, there are quite a few things that need to be fixed.
-Looking at Zero.EXE's height, they should be much taller. Almost twice as tall as MegaMan.EXE, judging by his appearance in both the anime and the Network Transmission game.
-The colors are also too high contrast. Look at Colorman.EXE's palette in the Bosses section of the Wonderswan sprites. Those subdued reds and yellows match a bit better.
-Zero's hair is actually one big piece that doesn't move, so the segmented hair that you made doesn't match too well. It's closer to a stiff cape.
-Lastly, Zero's face needs to be a darker grey. As it is, it simply looks like a face, with regular eyes. His eyes glow yellow and his whole face is a mask.

You've got a good start here. Just watch your proportions and colors. Keep it up, and I look forward to your next batch!


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12-01-2018 04:29 AM
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RE: Zero EXE Wonderswan Sheet
(12-01-2018 04:29 AM)DarkDeviant Wrote:  
(26-11-2017 08:17 PM)megaguy2222 Wrote:  Hello, I am megaguy2222, and today I present to you...
Zero.EXE! Rockman.EXE Wonderswan Style!
They're not bad, however, there are quite a few things that need to be fixed.
-Looking at Zero.EXE's height, they should be much taller. Almost twice as tall as MegaMan.EXE, judging by his appearance in both the anime and the Network Transmission game.
-The colors are also too high contrast. Look at Colorman.EXE's palette in the Bosses section of the Wonderswan sprites. Those subdued reds and yellows match a bit better.
-Zero's hair is actually one big piece that doesn't move, so the segmented hair that you made doesn't match too well. It's closer to a stiff cape.
-Lastly, Zero's face needs to be a darker grey. As it is, it simply looks like a face, with regular eyes. His eyes glow yellow and his whole face is a mask.

You've got a good start here. Just watch your proportions and colors. Keep it up, and I look forward to your next batch!

Well, I redid the colors, but I'll probably wait 'til tomorrow for the proportions.

New Colors
[Image: zero_exe_wonderswan_sheet_new_palette.png]

Better?
13-01-2018 02:07 AM
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